Reviews

Lola Moore is tired of the same tired type of guy she’s been dating, and hasn’t had a good date in a long time. A chance meeting with a US Army Master Sergeant and a winter storm are about to change all that! When Lola encounters the sexy Sergeant in the grocery store their attraction is instantaneous and they flirt as they pass each other through out the store. But it isn’t until Lola accidently runs into him with her cart that she decides to do anything about it. Fearing he might really be hurt and that if she lets him walk away she’ll never see him again, Lola takes him home. One thing is for certain, it won’t be cold at Lola’s house during the storm!

If your fantasy is meeting a stranger and having incredible sex then come along for the ride with Lola as she pursues her fantasy. I would never have the guts to risk taking a stranger home but it sure is fun to read about Lola’s adventure. I liked Lola’s confidence and willingness to go for what she really wants even if it might lead to heartache later. And the Sergeant in this story meets every fantasy of a hot military man rolled into a fun and beautiful package that I wish I could have unwrapped myself. Ms. Zel has a wicked sense of humor and fun that takes this sizzling, sexy encounter to another level by keeping the characters entertaining and the reader grinning. I will be on the lookout for other stories by Ms. Zel as her style of story is easy to read and fun for all my senses! If you want a fun, titillating, stranger encounter fantasy, you can’t go wrong with Master Sergeant!

Reviewed by: Stephanie B.

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Minneapolis, Minnesota is expecting a winter snowstorm that will pile eight to ten inches of snow on the ground by morning. Lola Moore decides to head to the grocery store to pick up a few things before heading home. She never realizes that a gorgeous Master Sergeant just might be one thing on her list that she didn't expect to pick up at the store.

 

Ms. Zel penned a fun, sexy and comical story that I enjoyed reading. I immediately fell in love with Lola and laughed at loud with her hysterical antics. She just seemed to be doing all the wrong things in front of the gorgeous hunk, Sam Johnson. One of those times was when she ran him over with her shopping cart in the parking lot of the grocery store. I couldn't help but laugh out loud from the scene that played out before me. This is a short read that I just know you'll love, but don't just take my word for it. Pick it up and see for yourself!..

The Review said: I never thought an encounter at the grocery store could lead to hot, mind blowing sex. Lola and Sam turn going to the grocery store into a thrilling adventure.
This is a fun and exciting short story. I would love to see what this author could do with a longer story. The only thing I found wrong with this story is it ended to soon.

Rating: 4..5 Whips
Heat Level: Erotica
Reviewer: Roberta

Posted by Mistress Bella

 

Kelli Zel an erotic author